plot:
when the world has first started there was the 4 elements earth , fire , water and wind those elements started the world as people from the time of castle but now when cars fly and planes go hyperspeed people belived that god created the world but do people really belive in that? in the world there was 8 people these were people with powers that they don't even know yet now when one of those 8 people discovered his power he knew he had to do something around the world the goverment had kept a huge area of monster that people don't even know yet these monsters were captured for helping earth staying peacefully but the man who ruled the earth thought there monster could bring them to a new land of gold so they used there brains and transerfered them to robot to find more money now the boy how hold the element of ice/water knew that he had to run away from his house to train his new power and now the legend that the elements has created will now add 4 more element of power but what could it be?

starting:
This boy kevin was a very smart person at school very hot around the girl on november 21 6:34 in the morning he notice that his room was very cold and so he wonder why is it so cold? when he went to the bathroom to get ready for school coming in the shower as fast the water showered down the ice freezed and cut him from his arms to leg he was hurt so he could not go to school but he knew if his mom found out something like that would happen so he got ready in a rough 30 mintues and left with out a trace as he walked to school he had wonder what is happening when the watered turn on it freezed agian he knew that it could be a bad luck or something ele's but for now he has been acting cool around everyone untill he finds out what he can do
"5 hours later" it lunch time he know if you go to lunch he could free everything the water but ehat ele's could he have done he need to eat so he raned outside thinking that he could get home in time befor his mom come hom and discover he has some odd ice power so as fast as he was going charging thought the street he see on his feet that the road where he i walking is turning to ice as he goes faster and faster befor he knows it he there as soon as he trys to get in he had steped on the water sparyer and the everywhere around had turned to ice even him he could not move what could he his mom coming home in 15 mintue and he is stuck he had to melt all the ice befor he die to!!!

This is not spelled checked

chapter 2 (coming soon)

heheh anyone like my story took me a few mintue to right then my hand got frozed so i guess i will write the next chapter in a few days

chapters:

1.Ice
2.Fire
3.earth
4.lighting
5.demons
6.fang
7.metal
8.wind
9.the master
10.plan

at the topic name it looked pretty good but when i started to read it let just say "_____"

i rate it a 5 i put up a poll so people can rate for you

it sounds cool at the begin then i can't read....

well i think it a good story!

yeah im with dark i hope the next one going to be better